lacma 2026: retitle — A Planetary Laptop Orchestra (was: The Unfinished Instrument)
"The Unfinished Instrument" was the right subtitle when the pitch was
abstract-philosophical ("the computer is under-designed"). Now that the
pitch leads with the PLOrk argument — surplus x86_64 laptops, $50/seat,
two orders of magnitude below Princeton, 240M Win10 orphans as feedstock
— it reads hand-wavy.
"A Planetary Laptop Orchestra" is direct, names the artistic lineage
(orchestra = art-music tradition with PLOrk, L2Ork, SLOrk, etc.), claims
scale (planetary), and lets the PDF explain the economic mechanism.
Applied everywhere:
- lacma-2026.tex title block
- LACMA-2026-APPLICATION-DRAFT.md Project Name + condensed pitch
- art-tech-lab-recipients.md (proposed-2026 row)
- papers/reader.tex part title for the LACMA chapter
- system/public/lacma-2026/index.html: <title>, H1, condensed pitch, meta description
PDF recompiled and synced to public/.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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