lacma-2026: jeffrey-ize the pitch, kill all em dashes, ground the grant arc
Voice pass on the 500-word Project Description per papers/VOICE.md (but
keeping formal punctuation — no lowercased leads, full sentences):
- "Personal computers have not been very personal." opens plain
- fragments replaced by short declarative sentences where formal
punctuation required them: "Platform consolidation cut it short.",
"Wider because anyone can publish.", "It is an argument."
- drop "we propose" ("During the grant period we will develop ...")
- drop hedges: "it will go wider and deeper" (not "it will go both")
- concrete over abstract throughout
Through-line facts newly surfaced in the pitch:
- website has been in active development since 2021 (19,000+ git
commits over 5 years); AC Native is new, kernel prototype landing
February 2026.
- "The whole stack is free and open source on GitHub" — explicit FOSS
claim, also in the Public Engagement statement.
Budget: drop NuPhy analog keyboards, add Mini Rig portable speakers
(5 × $120 = $600). Cascaded to tex, markdown, and landing page.
Em dashes scrubbed everywhere in the proposal (both tex '---' and
markdown '—'). Replaced with periods, commas, colons, parentheses, or
middle dots as each context called for. En-dashes in year ranges
('2021--', '3--5 recipients') stay.
Landing page:
- "What happens in the grant period" section rewritten to ground in
concrete AC dev history (5 years / 19k commits on the website, 2
months on native) and the 24-month delivery list — drops the meta
"structured to make those two sentences true" framing.
- Budget chip renamed NuPhy → Mini Rig speakers.
- Current Feature Set Input chip: "NuPhy analog keys" → "analog key
support".
CV: year+title entries switch from '---' to ',' (Yale School of Art,
MFA (Sculpture)). Software lines carry the distinction: AC from 2021
(19k+ commits over 5 years), AC Native from 2026 (kernel prototype
Feb 2026, 2 months of focused development).
Project description re-lands at 500 words exactly.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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